New Classes x3

I had a whole whopping 9 hours of class today, so this is quite a lengthy post.  Feel free to skip around, read it in sections, or whatever.


Here chronicles my first day of class:


Young Adult Science Fiction

Was pretty much what I expected from a first class.  Went over the syllabus, talked broadly about the topic of science fiction (its definition and its roots).  Will have to write a 2500-4000 word research paper, and I personally started brainstorming topic ideas.

  • Comparing Neal Shusterman’s Unwind to Mary Shelley’s Frankenstein
  • Games in Literature (Ender’s Game, Interstellar Pig, Jumanji, Harry Potter)
  • YA dystopian literature as a metaphor for adult’s view of a dark future with a hopeful ending
I’m guessing games in literature has probably been done before, so that’s probably not the most original topic idea.  I’d prefer to write about something that hasn’t been done before.  It means less research reading, and I like the opportunity to have original ideas.
Forms and Boundaries
This was probably the class I was most excited about.  The book list is very contemporary and interesting, which made me hopeful.  The professor also has a good reputation.
Post Class:  Still think this class will be awesome.  Essentially, we’re going to be examining HOW an author wrote what they wrote.  Breaking down form and structure.  Reading as a writer.  We’ll also be looking at how authors broke the rules of their genre.  I thought I would grow a lot by taking this class and I definitely think I will.
The class held my attention the whole time because there was stuff for us to DO.  She brought samples for us to analyze the form.  Learned some new words.  The teacher also slips in and out of silly accents as she’s speaking.
We have to do one presentation on something we want to do in our own writing, find an author who does it well, and break down how they do it in their writing.  Very worthwhile assignment.
We also have to do two short critical papers that are forms analyses.  However, she said the first one would not be graded because she said she didn’t think it was fair to grade us on this type of analysis right off the bat since we haven’t done it before.  Very fair.
Since I’m taking this as a creative course, I also have to do two creative assignments where I practice writing in one of the forms we are studying.  But she just wants it to be a rough attempt, not a masterpiece.  Again, fair.
The forms we are studying are: Picture Book, Poetry, Collage/Scrapbook, Graphic Novel, YA
So while this class will be a lot of work and stretching me, I also think she’s being very reasonable in her demands.
Writing Fantasy
The teacher of this course isn’t a regular member of the faculty, so I didn’t really know what to expect.  The verdict:  I am pleasantly surprised.
The reason I use the word surprised is I was a little wary of signing up for a class on writing fantasy.  It is a genre I enjoy reading, but I wouldn’t classify myself as a high fantasy writer.  More like I just enjoy throwing in made-up stuff, not creating whole new fantastic worlds.  I was wary because I thought perhaps it would be too much fantasy for me.
But the teacher is very knowledgeable about the craft of writing, has a well laid out plan for how the coursework will be organized, and I agree with a lot of her viewpoints on writing already.
Our first assignment is to write a rough draft of a short story inspired by the fairy tale “Goose Girl.”  I have a rough idea already, but it was hard for me initially because I have read Shannon Hale’s book Goose Girl which is a retelling of the same fairy tale.  So while the teacher was trying to pick an obscure fairy tale that would leave us with lots of questions, I felt like I already knew the story in depth from Shannon Hale’s lovely version.
We will be doing a ton of critiquing in this class.  Each of us will be writing two short stories and we will be critiquing 4 works per class period, and there’s twelve of us.  I’m not a math person, but in 6 weeks, that sounds like a lot of critiquing!
Well, nine hours of class today kind of wore me out, and I have assignments, reading, and conference prep to look forward to.  Let’s just say my iCal is looking pretty packed!  I think I need some tea.

Packing, Packing, Unpacking

The last three days have been LONG.  Packed up my classroom, packed a car full of stuff to take to graduate school, and unpacked a two car loads (one brought, one bought).  I want to say I slept soundly last night, but instead I was so excited to be here and start classes that I woke up practically every hour thinking: I’m here!  This is nice!  I want to go to class!  I want to write in the library!

No internet access right now due to some glitch on campus with Macs not being able to connect to the WiFi.  I came to Panera to log on briefly (I needed dates and times of all these meetings I have to go to… which were e-mailed to me… go figure).

I should have a long post coming up telling all about my first day of classes.  đꙂ

And the internet being down might be a good thing… no Facebook to distract me from reading and writing!

Initial Thoughts on Interstellar Pig

Really did not expect to like this book as much as I did!

Summary:
A cross between Jumanji and Men in Black? Sixteen year old Barney is on a boring vacation with his parents, but his trip gets more exciting when he learns of a ghost story, meets his strange visiting neighbors, and plays the board game “Interstellar Pig.”

Positives:
Writing flows smoothly. Well-paced. Intriguing plot. The board game is fun and clearly described. Characters were interesting and likable. Funny.

Criticism:
Really the only thing holding me back from giving it a five is that it’s not really my typical read and this book won’t go down in the all-time favorites. But I really, really liked it. Just probably won’t re-read it ever. Would definitely recommend it to people though.

Initial Thoughts on Isis Light

Summary: 
A girl who has lived on a planet all by herself must deal with settlers suddenly arriving and changing the home she has always known. 

Positives: 
Liked it more than I thought I would. But I’d heard a girl speak about the book… so I knew the big secret twist ahead of time. I might have liked it better if I hadn’t. The setting was vivid. The characters were pretty well-developed. 

Criticisms: 
Multiple times I thought the author’s word choice was awkward. The relationship between Orlen and Mark wasn’t developed thoroughly. The plot was predictable in parts. I didn’t particularly like the ending because it wasn’t hopeful or uplifting; no real resolution, just running away from the conflict.

Initial Thoughts on Wee Free Men

Summary:
A girl named Tiffany discovers she is a witch and must rescue her brother from an evil queen. Tiffany gets help from little blue men and learns to navigate between dreams and reality.

Positives:
Pratchett creates a quirky voice for Tiffany with lots of witty puns and unusual similes/metaphors.
The Nac Mac Feegles are one-of-a-kind characters and rather endearing.

Negatives:
The Queen really wasn’t all that threatening.
The world was not particularly engaging for a fantasy novel. Not very vivid. Not a place I want to travel to.
The stories about Granny Aching were boring.

Initial Thoughts on Meatloaf

Clever and original concept. Kids will love looking though this scrapbook style collection of notes and objects to figure out the story. 

However, I think the format of the book causes the book to become dated VERY, VERY quickly. The IM chat screens looked ancient. The pop culture references via magazines and the interests of the girl also made the book feel dated. Example: The girl wants to be the Sugar Plum Fairy in a ballet production. Comes off as very cliche and traditional. What about soccer, basketball, lacrosse, volleyball, or one of the many sports the modern girl participates in? 

I don’t know how to do a book like this and keep it timeless. It would be a serious challenge. 

I’d also like to see this concept applied with cultural diversity in mind. Meatloaf and ballerinas and science fair projects… screams white suburbia. 

The graphic layout/style would really appeal to English Language Learners and lower socioeconomic kids.

Initial Thoughts on Nomansland

I was so optimistic about this book that I chose to read it first.  Reviews compared it to The Giver.  The cover reminded me of Katniss in Hunger Games.  But sadly this book did not live up to either for me.

What the book is about:
In a future world, some sort of nuclear disaster has caused worldwide destruction and poverty.  Most people are left mutated by the radiation and struggling to survive.  There is an island of all women who are untainted by radiation and guard their island against the outside world.  The girls live by a strict code of rules and have no memories of how the world used to be.  They fear men and the mutants.


Why I think my professor chose this book:
I’m trying to think like my professor and analyze why tis book would be a good representation of sci-fi YA (particularly sci-fi that looks at gender).  This book is designed to promote feminist discussion.  It’s the major theme of the book: feminism.  That’s one reason why I think he chose it.  Another possible reason (and one of the only things I found interesting) was how the future people in the book described objects from the past.  Example: A large flat screen TV mystified the girls as there was no electricity, and they did not know what it did.  So they described it as a gray glass window that does not show you the view outside.  These descriptions were interesting because the reader would be trying to guess what object was being described, and from a sci-fi writer’s viewpoint you wonder how you would attempt to describe unknown objects from the past.

Why I did not particularly like the book:
The book was very dark and depressing.  Suicide, drugs, murder.  Not what I normally choose to read.  I like my dystopian lit books, but I still want to be rooting for my main character.  I still want the dystopian world to be intriguing.  I found the setting to be desolate and dull.  I felt no connection with Keller.  I did not find this to be a page turner at all.  There were some strange passages that described nipples and nudity.  And I really would never recommend this book to a teen I teach.  I would feel uncomfortable doing so because of the subject matter in the book (drugs, nudity, suicide, murder, anti-Christianity, rape).  I’d imagine many adults would feel similarly, and that will make this book a hard sell to school and libraries.  The only similarity to The Giver is that the book is about a strict dystopian society and written in unflowery, simple prose.  Perhaps Keller is a little like Katniss in that they both make tough decisions, are forced into roles they don’t want, and show leadership qualities.  But I didn’t care much about Keller.  I did care about Katniss.

What I wish this book had delved deeper into:
The relationships between the “pure” women who have been unaffected by radiation and the outside world.  More discovery about the mutant men who visit the island.  More about Ms. Windsor, her leadership, and the state of her people.  More about the disaster that created this world.

Back in Business

I’m blogging again as grad school is right around the corner!  Below are the three courses I’m taking, their descriptions, and the book lists.  Let me know if you’ve read any of the books I’m going to be reading!

Genre Study: Forms and Boundaries 
We will look at traditional forms of writing for young readers as launching points for genres that bend the boundaries and create new ones like novels in verse, graphic novels, intertextual writing, and metafiction, among others.  This course can be taking as a creative or critical credit and focuses on the study of the craft of writing through close reading and analysis and practicing what you learn through writing.
Text list:
Clare, Cassandra. Clockwork Angel
Fleischman, Paul. Genre bending text of your choice. 
Grimes, Nikki. Dark Sons
Hesse, Karen. Witness
Holm, Jennifer and Mathew. Baby Mouse: Queen of the World
Holm, Jennifer. Middle School is Worse Than Meatloaf
Hopkins, Ellen. Impulse
Macaulay, David. Black and White
Muth, Jon. Zen Shorts
Parker, Toni Trent. Sienna’s Scapbook: Our African American Heritage Trip.
Yang, Gene Luen. American Born Chinese


Genre Study: Fantasy
Realism is easy.  Fantasy is hard. 
You have to make an imaginary world feel, sound, look, and smell real.  You have to create supernatural creatures and magic systems and even societies that don’t distract your reader from the story you’re telling.  You have to do all that, and you still have to pay attention to the other things that go into all good fiction, like psychologically convincing characters, a compelling plot, narrative tension, an informing theme, and a personal voice.
In this course, we will focus on the issues of craft that are particularly important to the writing of fantasy:  exposition, world-building, and internal logic.  We’ll be doing close readings of three novels that exemplify three very different approaches to these problems. We’ll explore how to generate ideas for stories and plot-lines with prompts and exercises.  And we’ll write and critique drafts of between 2 and 4 fantasy short stories.

Text list:

Black, Holly. Tithe
Eager, Edward.  Half Magic
Pratchett, Terry. The Wee Free Men

Young Adult Science Fiction

We will examine of the history and development of technological literature (1910-1947) and science fiction (1947-present) written and marketed expressly for the young adult reader.  The seminar will also address variety of relevant topics: science fiction and literary theory, series books for young readers, science fiction and technology, gender in/and science fiction, science fiction and American cultural history and development.  Discussion will begin with the Tom Swift series (and others) from the first half of the twentieth century, move through such mid-century authors as Robert A. Heinlein, Isaac Asimov, and AndrĂ© Norton, and conclude with writers like Robert C. O’Brien, Monica Hughes, William Sleator, and Louise Lawrence.  Major critical works will include: Trillion Year Spree (Aldiss), Robert A. Heinlein: America as Science Fiction (Franklin), Back in the Space Ship Again (Sands and Frank), Science Fiction for Young Readers (Sullivan, ed.), and Young Adult Science Fiction (Sullivan, ed.).

Text list:
Appleton, Victor. Tom Swift and His Motorcycle
Burroughs, Edgar Rice. A Princess of Mars
Christopher, John. The White Mountains
Collina, Suzanne. The Hunger Games
Hauge, Leslie. Nomansland
Heinlein, Robert A. Rocket Ship Galileo 
Heinlein, Robert A. Have Space Suit–Will Travel
Hoover, H. M. Orvis
Hughes, Monica. Keeper of the Isis Light
Lawrence, Louise. Dreamweaver
L’Engle, Madeleine. A Wrinkle in Time
Norton, Andre. Time Traders
Sleator, William. Interstellar Pig
Smith, E. E. Skylark of Space

Last Class

Today I had my last Craft of Writing class, and tomorrow I have my last History and Crit class. Today was the more sad of the two days because I looooove my Craft of Writing class and I looooove my professor. I wish I could take this same exact group of people and just continue the class next summer. We took our teacher out to lunch after class, and I also bought a card for everyone to sign. We all want to keep in touch with her.

Today, our last assignment, was to create a final product that we would call our “Masterpiece.” It was essentially supposed to be a final copy of the first chapter of the book we’ve been working on for the last 6 weeks. We were also supposed to include the working title, book cover (which I drew myself!), book jacket blurb, a pretend “About the Author” and pretend praise for the book. Here is my cover (though it is a mirror image and I can’t figure out how to flip it. And then below is my pretend jacket blurb etc. Enjoy this glimpse of what I’ve been working on!
Being smart isn’t a good thing.

Getting the right answers on a test can get you killed.

The world doesn’t need smart people. We have computers now.
When her parents are killed for being too intelligent, Idalis knows it’s only a matter of time before she and her younger brother, Liam, meet the same fate. Idalis’ world is full of secrecy, violence, and deception. Can she survive? Is there anyone out there to trust?
About the Author
________ Hughes grew up in *********, just outside of our nation’s capital. She is very close with her two brothers, ______ and ______.  She received her Masters in Children’s Literature at ******* University. She was also a middle school teacher for ten years. Her favorite authors are Lois Lowry and J.K. Rowling, and she loves reading all genres of fiction. She also enjoys playing volleyball and being outside. Outwit is her first novel.
Praise for Outwit
“Hughes’ first novel deserves an A+ for taking its readers through a life and death question of what – and who – is really important. Sensitivity and science fiction walk hand in hand throughout her pages.” – Author, Nancy Ruth Patterson
“Outwit has a setting that is both eerie and familiar despite being set far in the future. The allusions to the Underground Railroad and prejudices in our past blend seamlessly with the story and give this science fiction novel a grounding realism. The thought-provoking and serious issues raised in this book will stay with you long after you turn the last page. Great things can be expected from this first-time novelist.” –Booklist (note: This is PRETEND praise. Not Real!)

Critique Day

Sooooo… Today we had a critique day, where we brought in 3 copies of our first chapter in it’s most final form. We got into groups of 4 and took turns reading people’s work and giving feedback.

I just got finished reading through what my peers wrote(which wasn’t much), and… how do I put this? My friend, “S” gave me the best feedback. She posed questions I hadn’t considered, and pointed out exact places to elaborate. The other two people’s feedback wasn’t quite as useful. One kept suggesting I cut out words that would have turned a lot of my sentences into fragments, but then again my criticism for her was that she overused sentence fragments. And she recommended I change the order of some parts, but I don’t understand the reasoning behind some of the moves. Then the other guy is adorable, but didn’t write much. Though he made a couple of good formatting suggestions.
And now I feel kind of bad because I pretty much bled ink on their paper. I didn’t leave a space unmarked. And I don’t know if their self-esteem is ready to see that on their work…
Especially as a teacher and having lots of practice grading, this is something I’m used to doing. And I don’t think the others in my group were. But in addition to that, this class has made me really analytical of writing, and I read differently now than I used to. So I really saw today, for the first time, that I have the potential to be a book editor. My teacher even told me individually that she thought I’d make an excellent book editor. Pretty cool. It’s like another career path has opened up before me that doesn’t look too shabby.
My teacher was absolutely adorable and bought ALL of us a copy of one of her books and autographed them for us. Then she also wrote a pretend review blurb for our books.
I don’t have my blurb with me at the moment, but it was really sweet and she said something about my book “blending sentimentality and science fiction seamlessly.” I may not have the wording right but it was something like that.
I’m exhausted because I’ve been staying up until the wee hours of the night and then not sleeping terribly well. But I’ll be home in 4 days, where I will surely catch up on sleep in my own beautiful bed. Until then, I’ll be proofreading and revising papers…